Yarn and Fabric related

I made this from a book called My Rag Doll by Corinne Crasbercu, it is an adorable book with lovely dolls and clothes and a terrible book with difficult to follow patterns with very little detail and no pictures. Many of the patterns in the book have no pictures that show any details, like there are no details for the blouse for the doll on the front cover, it is covered with a bandana and dungarees, so when trying to follow the pattern you have no idea what you are aiming at doing. So with that in mind I have struggled through and often just used my own common sense as to how something should or could be made, I have never made clothes before so I'm no expert in this field.